"我希望你假定自己是雅思寫作考官，根據(jù)雅思評判標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，按我給 你的雅思考題和對應(yīng)答案給我評分，并且按照雅思寫作評分細(xì)則給 出打分依據(jù)。此外，請給我詳細(xì)的修改意見并寫出滿分范文。D一 個問題是：Itissometimesarguedthattoomanystudentsgo touniversity,whileothersclaimthatauniversityeducation shouldbeauniversalright.Discussbothsidesofthe argumentandgiveyourownopinion.對于這個問題，我的答案 是：Insomeadvancedcountries,itisnotunusualformore than50%ofyoungadultstoattendcollegeoruniversity. Critics,however,claimthatmanyuniversitycoursesare worthlessandyoungpeoplewouldbebetteroffgainingskills intheworkplace.Inthisessay,Iwillexaminebothsides ofthisargumentandtrytoreachaconclusion.Thereare severalreasonswhyyoungpeopletodaybelievetheyhavethe righttoauniversityeducation.First,growingprosperity inmanypartsoftheworldhasincreasedthenumberof familieswithmoneytoinvestintheirchildren’sfuture. Atthesametime,fallingbirthratesmeanthatone-or two-childfamilieshavebecomecommon,increasingthelevel ofinvestmentineachchild.Itishardlysurprising, therefore,thatyoungpeoplearewillingtolettheir familiessupportthemuntiltheageof21or22.Furthermore, millionsofnewjobshavebeencreatedinknowledge industries,andthesejobsaretypicallyopenonlyto universitygraduates.However,itoftenappearsthat graduatesendupinoccupationsunrelatedtotheiruniversity studies.ItisnotuncommonforanEnglishliteraturemajor toendupworkinginsales,oranengineeringgraduateto retrainasateacher,forexample.Somecriticshave suggestedthatyoungpeoplearejustdelayingtheirentry intotheworkplace,ratherthandevelopingprofessional skills.請依次給到我以下內(nèi)容：具體分?jǐn)?shù)及其評分依據(jù)、文章修 改意見、滿分范文。"